thats some doogy i applied for staff and they said to put more detail in to it and i did thats some bull imma bake a exposing video on this for my channel wow thats just a wow
the chinese thing above explains fully what they mean when they say "not detailed enough"
oh also I want to stress this as well: make your application as arbitrary and tedious as necessary. Show good grammar and capitalize your sentences(I assume you already know this). Demonstrate a will to help people on the server no matter what, because a staff member that is prioritizing playing games over helping people(playing games is still ok though!) will be demoted. Be cheerful and positive.
be and always act mature no matter what as well or you will be demoted