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The Artist

Discussion in 'Arts & Banner Showcase' started by saltyfishhy, Jan 21, 2020.

  1. Poem by saltyfishhy


    The artist grasps the pencil that trace
    His limit is only restrained by his mind
    Every stroke, line, feature, and face
    The admiring viewers doth happily find

    He spends seconds, minutes, hours a day
    With no reward he continues his labor
    To pay the costly price to go his way
    To everyday strengthen and be greater

    For the great reward to continue to pay
    So more and more art can come
    He works every possible hour he may
    Like a pirate constantly drinks his rum

    The artist is the most admirable trade
    From his own two hands, his art is made

    Hey guys! This is not remotely the best thing I've ever written, as it is something from 2017 but I just thought I'd share it here as it talks about art and is also a poem! I hope you guys enjoy and don't ridicule my 7th grade writing abilities too much! :)
     
    Posted Jan 21, 2020
  2. Sounds like your describing @Iscariot :P great poem though, didn't know you were so good at poetry!
     
    Posted Jan 21, 2020
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  3. :o that's really good! I took a Literature class last year in my final year of high school, and we had to do some poetry work. I thought I would really like it, but I struggled with it so much. Writing poetry is really hard, and this is pretty good, so all I can really say is really well done!
     
    Posted Jan 21, 2020
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  4. Thanks guys <3
     
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    OP OP Posted Jan 22, 2020
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  5. That's a great poem you have! I remember I first wrote my poem during my middle school year, I think. I tried to create some of my poems before, but mine failed. Anyways, I don't have any suggestions I want to add about your poem. Other than that, that's a great job you have!
     
    Posted Jan 22, 2020
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  6. Wow! That’s awesome fishy, I didn’t know you were so good at poetry! I would definitely like to see more of your poems in the future, keep up the good work! <3
     
    Posted Jan 22, 2020
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